A fragment is a portion of a sentence that is punctuated as though it were a complete sentence. Most sentence fragments are phrases or dependent clauses. You can avoid writing sentence fragments if you recognize the difference between a fragment and a complete sentence.
Fragment
The telephone with two outside lines. [no verb]
Revised
The telephone has two outside lines.
Fragment Having been
king and ruler of all he surveyed. [no subject]
Revised
Having been king and ruler of all he surveyed, John found it
difficult to step down .
Fragment Because the
telephone rang loudly. [dependent clause]
Revised
Because the telephone rang loudly, the family was awakened.
If you write sentence fragments frequently, you need a system to check that your sentences are complete. Here is a test to use if you suspect that you have written a sentence fragment.
1. Is there a verb?
2. Is there a subject?
3. Do the subject and
verb start with a subordinating word but lack an
independent clause to complete the thought?
Clauses are grammatically related
groups of words that contain a subject and a predicate
Dependent Clauses contain subjects
and predicates but begin with subordinating
words and, therefore, cannot stand alone as sentences.
A Subordinating Conjunction is one type of subordinating word (after,
although,
as, because, before, even though, if, since, though, unless, until, when,
whenever, where, wherever).
A Relative Pronoun is another type of subordinating word (that,
what, whatever,
which, whichever, who, whoever).
Correcting Sentence Fragments
Revise dependent clauses punctuated as sentences and join them to adjacent independent clauses, or revise them into independent clauses.
Fragment Many
people over twenty-five years of age are deciding to get
college degrees. Because they want the benefits of an
advanced education.
Revision Many
people over twenty-five years or age are deciding to get
college degrees because they want the benefits of an advanced
education. (one sentence)
Revision Many
people over twenty-five years of age are deciding to get
college degrees. They want the benefits of an advanced
education. (structures combined)
Another Possible Fragment Problem
Prepositional phrases (phrase containing a preposition, its object,
and any
modifiers)
Fragment Cigarette
smoke made the conference room seem airless. During the
long news conference.
Revision Cigarette
smoke make the conference room seem airless during the
long news conference. (one sentence)