COMMA SPLICE
A comma splice occurs when a comma by itself
joins independent clauses.
The hurricane intensified, it turned toward land.
The hurricane intensified, then it turned toward land.
FUSED SENTENCE
A fused sentence occurs when independent clauses are not separated by appropriate punctuation. (It is also known as a run-on sentence or a run-together sentence.)
The
hurricane intensified then it turned toward land.
The hurricane intensified and it turned toward
land.
CORRECTING COMMA SPLICES AND FUSED SENTENCES
Use a period.
The hurricane intensified. Then it turned toward land.
Use a comma plus a coordinating conjunction.
The hurricane intensified, and it turned toward land.
Use a semicolon if the two clauses are closely related in content..
The hurricane intensified; its winds increased to 150 miles per hour.
Use a semicolon and a conjunctive adverb.
The hurricane intensified; therefore the remaining residents left the coast.
Revise one of two independent clauses into a dependent clause.
As the hurricane intensified, it turned toward land.
The hurricane intensified as it turned toward land.
Proofreading Tip
Cover all the words on one side of the
comma to see if the words remaining constitute an independent clause. Then
cover that clause, and uncover all the words on the other side of the comma.
If the structures on both sides of the comma are independent clauses, you
have written a comma splice and should correct it.